Avatar 2016

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Thursday, 3 November 2016

Paragragh Writing


In class we have been learing to group similar ideas into paragraphs. Here is one I wrote about an important person to me.


My Dad is a special person to me. My mum thinks that Dad is a man child because he doesn’t act serious. He talks silly like a clown. Once he beeped at a dog on the hard concrete road and he said  “He pooped his fur. He has a good sense of humour and we laugh at him. He also takes me to fun things like a park with a big field so we can kick the rugby ball round and sometimes I take my toy cars down to the park and Dad and I race them down the slide. Once when he took me to a big black bouncy castle he joined in and double bounced me to the sky. lol.

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